Wow, what a good chapter. You are so good with plot. There are so many layers here. It's like a soap opera with main plots and subplots. I was really, really rooting for Lee and Dee here. I'm not sure why they didn't bond through their grief. Something is not right between them and I'll never understand it. But poor Dee. I felt for her. But I did find myself missing Hoshi. I hope we see more of him in the next chapter.

And thanks for treating pregnancy loss so sensitively in this chapter. I missed that for Caprica Six on the show. I mean they didn't have to go into extensive detail, but I would have liked to have seen her grieving just once after the miscarriage. You make it seem very real here and it should be.

And that first scene? They are such kids sometimes with Cottle as the only adult. Makes me smile. :-)