I like the changes you made to the ending. It works a lot better. :)
I won't say this chapter made me excited- because Hoshi's got cancer and that's not exactly exciting, but it's nice to see their breakthrough here. And the Admiral showing up for the procedure is a nice touch. I like seeing the caring side of Adama. But Lee...*shakes head* At least I know he's trying.
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Date: 2009-06-12 03:11 am (UTC)I like the changes you made to the ending. It works a lot better. :)
I won't say this chapter made me excited- because Hoshi's got cancer and that's not exactly exciting, but it's nice to see their breakthrough here. And the Admiral showing up for the procedure is a nice touch. I like seeing the caring side of Adama. But Lee...*shakes head* At least I know he's trying.