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So, I posted Chapter 6 of A Lot to Live Up To yesterday. You know, I kind of wish I could get this finished before Remix assignments went out. I don't know that my remixer would choose it, especially because it's so long, but I would LOVE to see Hoshi's side of this story.

Working on Chapter 7. First of all, I do NOT want to play "No Exit" here and do a backstory info dump. But also, Cottle of all people is driving me nuts. I think after I'm done with this, I'm going to go through and eliminate half the medical talk in it. The entire chapter takes place in sickbay, and Cottle's more a role than a character (which makes sense), but he's driving me bonkers. People don't want to read all the medical technobabble, dude. Go smoke a cigarette instead.

Ran four miles this morning, and am now sunburned and still guzzling water like it's going out of style. But it's been a good weekend- picnic and carnival yesterday, beautiful weather, nice night last night, and chocolate covered strawberries :)

We also watched Caprica on Friday. ( Thoughts and impressions. )

I'll have to write up a real review for MRFH.

Back to trying to get Cottle to stop jargoning. Yay :)