Oh, yes, I like this. I like the changes you made from the preview in your journal, and I love the backstory. (Can't wait to see what Hoshi forces out of you on that ;) ) I did mostly guess right! But it was much more interesting to hear Louis tell the tale.
The Lee moments hurt a lot. He has baggage, and she has pain, and neither of them are being completely honest with each other... It was hurty. Especially knowing what happens with them.
Poor Dee and Hoshi. <3 I love this so much. Now we need Felix, Louis, Dee and Noel to be the greatest friend group EVER before three of them die and leave poor Louis all alone. :) (I mean, this is YFL compliant, so yeah, Hoshi loses everyone. Poor boy.)
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Date: 2009-06-14 04:23 am (UTC)The Lee moments hurt a lot. He has baggage, and she has pain, and neither of them are being completely honest with each other... It was hurty. Especially knowing what happens with them.
Poor Dee and Hoshi. <3 I love this so much. Now we need Felix, Louis, Dee and Noel to be the greatest friend group EVER before three of them die and leave poor Louis all alone. :) (I mean, this is YFL compliant, so yeah, Hoshi loses everyone. Poor boy.)