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I've never drabbled before (me? Drabble? Come on, I write 20 page chapters), but these are fun.

Here's the first two, both 100 words exactly:

Title: Caught Red Handed
Rating: G
For [livejournal.com profile] ignipes, who wanted McGonagall catching Fred and George doing something illegal, but letting them off the hook.



“And for the low, low price of two sickles, you too can avoid Arithmancy, depart Divination and skive off Sinastra! Oh, hello, Professor,” George said as the crowd gathered around the twins promptly dispersed.

Professor McGonagall fixed George and Fred with a firm eye. “What did I tell you about selling your merchandise on school grounds?”

Fred had the decency to look embarrassed, but George met her eyes.

“I hear that Professor Umbridge is running the staff meeting today,” he said innocently.

McGonagall sighed and rooted through her pockets. “All right. I’ll take a Puking Pastille and a Nosebleed Nougat.”



Title: In from the Cold
Rating: G
For [livejournal.com profile] mackittenx, who wanted post-Hogwarts/pre-Azkaban boys.



Melted snow dripped down his collar, making Sirius shiver. “You should have left the bike in this weather,” Remus chuckled, toweling Sirius’s hair dry.

“Couldn’t do that,” he said between chattering teeth as Remus slid his shirt off and dried his arms.

“Come on. Put these on.” Remus extended a pair of warm pajamas.

Soon they were curled up together in front of the fire, a thick quilt wrapped around them and mugs of hot chocolate nearby. Sirius lay down and rested his head in Remus’s lap.

“First time I’ve been warm all day,” he said, and Remus just smiled.

Date: 2005-04-20 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ignipes.livejournal.com
Those are both really great. Thanks!

(And, just so you know, I've discovered something worse than having my comps tomorrow: Having my comps tomorrow and having the hard drive on my computer DIE A PAINFUL DEATH with the uncanny timing of all things computer-related. GRRRRR.)

Date: 2005-04-21 12:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marauderthesn.livejournal.com
Oh, I like them. Nice job. :)

Date: 2005-04-21 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aome.livejournal.com
I wrote a 75-page story two years ago and it was a downright miracle. Wish I had your problem with long stories. ;) I enjoyed the bite-size drabbles, though - the first one especially, even though the second was very sweet.

xDDD

Date: 2005-04-21 03:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jlarinda.livejournal.com
Awwww the R/S is SO cute!!! xD
And I loved the Fred & George one!! It's so funny! Even though I was hoping for a different kind of thing when I say the "Fred and George" thing, lol

Date: 2005-04-21 03:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] topaz-eyes.livejournal.com
Aren't drabbles fun? The Fred/George one was brilliant! LOL! The R/S one was sweet, light and fluffy...awww.

Date: 2005-04-21 10:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cloudlessnights.livejournal.com
The second drabble is very sweet, and I just love the first one, because the idea of Fred and George selling Skiving Snackboxes to McGonagall cracks me up. I wonder how Hermione would react if she knew that?

Date: 2005-04-21 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lls-mutant.livejournal.com
Ahhh! That REALLY sucks! Hope your comps go/went well, and that you kicked butt!!!!

(And thanks for the drabble topic. I've never written Fred and George, and that was fun.)

Date: 2005-04-21 06:19 pm (UTC)

Date: 2005-04-21 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lls-mutant.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm really fond of the first one, too. I love the twins and McG, and writing in the era I do I NEVER write the twins.

Re: xDDD

Date: 2005-04-21 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lls-mutant.livejournal.com
Heh. Sorry. I definitely do NOT write incest at all. Total squick for me.

Thanks though!

Date: 2005-04-21 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lls-mutant.livejournal.com
They are! Now on to the next two...

Thanks. I'm really very fond of the F&G one, too. They're fun.

Date: 2005-04-21 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lls-mutant.livejournal.com
I wonder how Hermione would react if she knew that?

Heheh. I would LOVE to know. Thanks though! I also prefer the first one. Maybe because I just write so much R/S or whatever, but the F&G one was so much fun (although I really had to think of WHAT she would catch them doing!)

Date: 2005-04-22 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyasuriin.livejournal.com

oh i love it! :) all fluffly and warm (but doesn't make my teeth hurt, heheh)
and the other one is hilarious. Love McG! :D

Re: xDDD

Date: 2005-04-22 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jlarinda.livejournal.com
I know, I know. Lots of things I ADORE squick you, so I knew there wasn't a chance in hell this'd be lovely twincest. *tear*
Lol, it was so funny anyway, I totally see that happening in OotP!! XDD


Date: 2005-04-23 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jlarinda.livejournal.com
(although I really had to think of WHAT she would catch them doing!)

*mental image* I have a few ideas...Lol
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