Thoughts on Accidentally In Love

Well, the good news is that the draft of Part 9 just spewed out of my printer and is waiting for me to get out to my engine lab so I can edit it. I'm really happy with most of the plot, but when I was reading through I noticed that I had some issues with word choice (a lot of repeated finallys and... I forget what else, but a lot of repeated words). I should have it posted by the end of the day, barring noting that I'm missing any big scenes.

( More thoughts behind the text, but they include spoilers for Part 9. Not for any parts beyond that though. At least, I don't think so. )

Accidentally In Love, Part IX

( Part IX, subpart 2 behind the cut )

Accidentally In Love IX

Title: Accidentally In Love Part 9
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine
Notes: none, for a change. Although it is pretty dark. But you knew that.

( Part IX- Disappearing )